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„The Lost Notebook“ of Olivia Chevron
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Omslag
My notebook lies furred in a layer of dust
When Lela's asking eyes ebbed with the sea;
Her opportune flagrance of will and must
Were not for waiting loves, or him, or me.
Atlantic spring tides could not make room
For a Burma Star or regimental wings
That beat on empty pages where so soon
I'll leaf from Lela, and small elusive things.
Saturday 4th November, 2006
*My Writer may, from her Reader's Brazilian stories, recall Lela from the Avenida Atlantico in Rio de J.
The effort below has not yet been typed up for his own corrections etc. It was inspired by your "The Lost Notebook"
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Omslag
My notebook lies furred in a layer of dust
When Lela's asking eyes ebbed with the sea;
Her opportune flagrance of will and must
Were not for waiting loves, or him, or me.
Atlantic spring tides could not make room
For a Burma Star or regimental wings
That beat on empty pages where so soon
I'll leaf from Lela, and small elusive things.
Saturday 4th November, 2006
*My Writer may, from her Reader's Brazilian stories, recall Lela from the Avenida Atlantico in Rio de J.
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