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„these nights offer five hours of darkness“ of Nadine Glink
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I like your poem
but it's hard to read when you don't use any more structure than that.
Also - or because of that - it seems to me more like short story.
All the same, it#s impressing in mood & language
but it's hard to read when you don't use any more structure than that.
Also - or because of that - it seems to me more like short story.
All the same, it#s impressing in mood & language
The poem is very exciting and mysterious. I liked reading it. At the end I then became again released from the tension, with your final sentence.
keep on writing like this, best wishes Jens
keep on writing like this, best wishes Jens
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