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„the haunted hill“ of Tommy Sarsano

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Rosekill (skribbelzyahoo.com)

11.02.2010
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Yes i do dare to stay a night at Hickery Hill. Oook, ok. You have some serious writing problameo's. 1. You spelt a lot of words wrong. What grade are you in 2nd. 2. you make almost no sence.
Another is one word not two
There's no e in owl
And it's annuale, not what ever you put.
God Tommy learn to write.

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