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„SLEEPY HOLLOW“ of Anna Jansen

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I Bebe (irene.beddiesgmx.de)

04.08.2012
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Dear Anna,

you wrote a remarcable ballad of Gothik horror. I Like it very much. As I also write in English half of the time I understand your plea for correcting mistakes. Forf me it does usually my daughter who lived 13 years in USA. In your fine piece I think I found a minor error in the last line: one can loose HIS head...or ONE'S head.
Kindest regards
Irene

Answer by Anna Jansen (16.08.2012):
Dear Irene, thank you so much for your comment and correction :). I usually write and speak english the way I think is right- ergo: not always accurate. A friend of me already found severel other mistakes *argh* but after all I'm not even close to a native speaker or someone with years of daily practice (I envy you...) Kindest regards Anna

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