02/19/2009
Category "Life" (Poems in english)
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Jutta Knubel

Fucking fight

I asked myself whats going on?
What the fuck is going wrong?

Really nothing, yes, nothing is better,
since you left me, feel you ever.

Shouldn`t we love us rather than lying?
Shouldn`t we feel alive rather than dying?

I want your love, it`s clear!
I want you forever here!

I feel you every night!
Every night this fucking fight...

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Published on e-Stories.org on 02/19/2009.

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Dearest jutta,

sure, it´s a really fucking fight, but believe me. take this fight to learn anyone for the future! the future is much more important as the past!ok, the past can get hurtly,but the future is waiting for everyone! The echo cry everyone, everyone, everyone...´! Take this my dear!

mit ganzen lieben grüßen
mr ulimann

holy02/19/2009

Liebe Jutta,

für mich hast du eine Mischung von Wut und Sehnsucht in deine Worte gepackt... Umtausch in Freude und Erfüllung wird kommen.. :-)

Liebe Grüße
Faro

hansl02/19/2009

Wenn er nich will Jutta, ich komme sofprt und dann packen wir den Koffer und ab, nach Kuba! Brauchen nicht viel! Fucking fight!!!
Franz

FranzB02/19/2009

Ich denke, man hätte die durchaus gute Kritik auf ein besseres Sprachniveau bringen können. Ansonsten kein schlechtes Gedicht.

Sebastian

Sektion3102/19/2009

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