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„Bride of Dusk“ of Andy Klemm

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Rosekill (skribbelzyahoo.com)

06.01.2011
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"So let me in, once more I beg, open wide them gates to pleasant hell"
I really like this deatil. although it's kinda disturbing . . . ha ha. I like the way you write. The scene of two lovers sex life and how much excitment etc. the narrator feels is really discriptive. I can imagine it all. Although I don't think i want to....you could possibly turn this into a real love story. :)

Answer by Andy Klemm (07.01.2011):
Hey Rosekill, THX for your kind words for my "disturbing" poetry :D I doubt it would work as a love story, though, for I wanted to write a love scene that plays with the basic urge of sex, dressed in not so pleasant words ;) I´m glad you liked it ;)

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