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„Flashbacks“ of Natalie Delacroix

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Pietroschek (pietroschekgmail.com)

24.02.2023
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Solid story, and the format was also done well.

timdee (tim.martin54321yahoo.es)

27.09.2011
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I liked it. Congratulations! The page breaks made it look like you had trouble joining up the flashbacks to the present / the flashbacks were clear because of the nature of the event but the detail could be fuzzy to make it sensitive... thanks, Tim

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