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„I sit on the bench in our park“ of Stefanie Haertel

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mauro (mauromontacchiesilibero.it)

05.07.2024
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The poem is in free verse.
It has neither fixed metrics nor rhymes.
Thus it is direct and accessible.
The simple language allows easy penetration of the author\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s passions and message.
"I sit on the bench in our park" gives rise to a feeling of insistence on place and continuity.
This has a special meaning for the poet.
The poem expresses acceptance and gratitude mixed with a strong feeling of sadness and loss.
"My soul is screaming your name" and "I feel glad" show a path of inner healing well represented.
The main message should be identified in the ability to transform pain into something positive through remembrance, but also in gratitude and management of loss.
These themes affect everyone and echo in so many individuals, producing added value for the lyric.
The expression of emotions is crystal clear, to the point of emotionally engaging the reader.
The structure is consistent and simple.
"I sit on the bench in our park" closes the narrative circle.

mauro (mauromontacchiesilibero.it)

05.07.2024
Pictur Author
Very good job.

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