02/13/2009
Category "Love & Romance" (Poems in english)
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Jutta Knubel

My Lord

Hold me all the night, all the night.
Let us play, game of love, let`s fight.

Touch my soul, touch my heart.
Nevermore want to feel apart.

Kiss my center, my lips, my chest.
Kiss my hands and all the rest.

Punish me and be my strange, hard lord.
Handle me, forbid me speaking a word.

Come on, make me to your queen tonight.
It`s so wonderful to be yours, yes, its right…

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Ich wollte Dir schon eine romantische Antwort auf englischer Sprache schreiben Jutta! Jedoch ja, man liest ja mit! Schmunzel!
You are Queen, not only one night!
Franz

FranzB02/13/2009

Das gefällt mir :)

Das gefällt mir sogar sehr! ;)

Wenn die Liebe zu einem Krieg wird, der zärtlich und grausam zugleich geführt wird, so kann es wohl kaum eine größere Faszination geben, die es zu erkunden gilt ...

Alles Liebe
Philipp

Weltenwandler02/13/2009

Liebe Jutta,

eine kleine Korrektur:

Entweder:

1. forbid me speaking a word oder

2. forbid me to speak a word

Sonst alles ok

Herzlich grüßt
Karl-Heinz

Goslar02/13/2009

Hi Jutta, good, very good. With a wordless Lovefight in the Sky...Happy Fly :-) Bussi Muggel

Muggel02/14/2009

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