Andre M. Pietroschek

Undying Hate - Unfinished Free Verse Poem

Undying Hate (e-stories.de edition, 2023)
© Andre M. Pietroschek, all rights reserved


Spontaneously written for my poetizer dot com portfolio, this freestyle poem failed. It isn't really doublets or couplets either. The problem was: I lost the writing flow, and simply had no better ideas. On the good side: I can delete, or improve, it later. ;-)


Hate: Condemned, feared, ridiculed, or outcast,
Undying hate still is a factual power in each life.

Few of us find faith, mindset, and fortitude, as;
Our bodies will fail us, yet timeless hate won't.

We can worship denial, due to science, whatever,
Yet hate has more power, and can be more clever.

I remember the women's catalog of demands made,
Each convinced they offer better than undying hate.

Still, if I share the real truth of my not-so-easy life,
Hate was more reliable & more useful than a wife!

Some call it a dark path, freak out, or commit crime,
I call it a tricky choice, as hate left us `learning time´.

Life needs discipline, timing, and wisdom for good,
Media only show the failures, who never understood.

Maturity can make us realize in life, or much too late:
That hate needs an `us´ living up to our chosen fate!

Easy, reckless, and irresponsible aren't adult enough? 
Nope, undying hate isn't about a selfish coward in love!

Hence, even when worried about my mortal way to end; 
Undying hate made no demands, for it came as a friend!


The ones, who scapegoat hate are in truth the ones, who
messed-it-up and do not even try better. Righteous
fury happens just as often, as diabolical rage or what
modern people call hate-crimes. Call it so, as few ever
delivered us any evidence at all.

I made a decent video about this poem:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdDoqFp1wCU
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