Don't look at me with questioning eyes. It's you, believing in your lies. Don't look at me this way. A simple smile would make me stay. Don't look at me while kissing her!
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Wow! Katrin Blatnick...
So few words which reveal the true
state of your emotions.
Well done Katrin
Short but exact. like the alliterations/repetitions - good impact.
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