Katrin Blatnik

Second Chances, Part One: 'Pain'

So, I find myself standing on a rooftop,
surrounded by memories of a moment
that turned my whole world upside-down.
They come in flashbacks.
YOU in the middle of a mess called 'home'.
YOU playing guitar in the middle of the night.
YOU switching on the telly and handing me a rootbeer.
YOU cooking dinner, unprepared for what's to come. 
YOU standing on the sidewalk, torn.
And ME shouting 'Get the hell away from me!'
I pushed you away
when all I needed was
your loving embrace... 


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Published on e-Stories.org on 10/05/2006.


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