10,9,8,7,6,5,the bomb ticked down 4,3,2,snip! Just in time jimmy sniped the wire, deactivating the bomb. Jimmy and bob were best frends and sandiagos best bomb squad opertives. They had just saved a church from a mager remodeling, they narroly stoped the bomb befor it was too late. As they walked out bob saide to jimmy "how did you know it was the red wire?" "i didnt" replide jimmy, "im just realy luckey."
The next day they both got a call that some sico hade a school held up and was hevily armed, Five minutes later jimmy and bob arrived. they walked in the building and emediatly the sico fired at them. the jump agenst walls opisit eachother and pulled out there pistols. Jimmy jumped out of the corner and fire!, but there was noone there!!!! H e relised too late it was a trick, the sico was hidden in a corner 20 feet away from him. He jumped out and fired twice, then hid agen, bob dove in front of jimmy and took two bulits to the cest. He layed silent not moving on the floor as blood trickled from his chest. Jimmy screamed nooooooooooooo!!!!,then kicked over a desk and hid. When the sico poped out agen he fired a hole round in his head it was over,bob was dead. The next day jimmy got a medale for bravery, an hour later he laid it on bobs grave and said "For you.............thanks." he walk away in th rain.
2 years later bob was added to the police hall of fame. by T SARSANO
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Published on e-Stories.org on 09/03/2009.
ok then you spelt a lot of things wrong but over all it was a good story thng. any ways i have your stupid alien story:(your stupid alien story):
When i went out to the parking lot i saw an alien, it ponted at me and then at the sky. all of a sudden i was sucked up from the ground, as i was floating throw the air i realized that i was being sucked up by a tracktor beam. All of a sudden i slammed my head on something hard. the next thing i knew the world went black.
woke up i was on a metal table and rhere were all kinds of needles and tubs hooked up to me. I yanked them out of me and sat up. Suddenly i was face to face with a green skin red bug eyed alien he opened his enormuse mouth and said beeeeee, i didn't know what it said, but all i knew was i had to get out before something bad happened, So, i kept trying to leave, but it never worked. The alien kept speaking in its natural language. It kept on saying, beeeeee. I think it was telling what they were going to do. I looked around to think of something to hit the alien in the head with. All i found was a tube that i know wouldn't hurt if i threw it at him, it was wroth a try though. I quickly took the tube and wacked the alien in the head with it until he was on the ground unconscious. I started to run towards some doors until... I saw what looked like a black marker (pernament too_. I ran back to the almost dead alien and decided his face was too ugly, so i thought that maybe drawing on him would be pay back for abducting me.
when i was done it looked like a horse/dog/cat thingy. I ran towards the door and saw it open. Looked dawn at earth!!! I jumped out finally realizing i didn't have a parachute, and landed dead, flat in the middle of anartica, but some how i flew all the way to new york city the exact parking lot i was at. But still completly dead. Brains everywhere and bones here and there on the asphalt. Head dislocated yuck and all of a sudden i was alive again, suddenlt i saw an alien waving at me, then he was gone.
Tommy i switched some words around and i kinda changed some things to it. So yea, u finally have your alien story thing back. ^.^
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