Jessica Idczak

Incomplete

So, ihr Lieben, hier erreicht euch also mein erster Versuch eines englischen Gedichtes.
Im Kopf hatte ich die letzten beiden Zeilen, als ich anfing zu schreiben, doch mir war klar,
 
ich konnte die zwei nicht allein stehen lassen.
Also versuchte ich mich einfach mal und hier habt ihr nun das Ergebnis.
Ich gehe davon aus, dass mein Englischlehrer mich killen wird, wenn er das liest. Ich hoffe, er bekommt es nie zu Gesicht ;)

Also dann, hier nun mein Werk:


I'm lying in my bed tonight,
wish you were here to hold me tight.
I'm surrounded by deeply sadness,
without you I feel so homeless.

My home sweet home has gone with you,
that's no lie but really true.
My love was taken with you,
I even crack up without you.

Never before I felt this feelings I feel,
ever I thought my strength is like steel.
But now I know: You're all that I need,
'cause without you I feel so incomplete.

 

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Published on e-Stories.org on 09/04/2005.

 

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