Bernhard Pappe

Feet Back (Word Games)

„Feedback,
I need feedback.”
He shouted out loud.
The feet came back
and the world
kicked him in his ass.

BPa / 12-2013

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Published on e-Stories.org on 12/07/2013.

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Pretty word-game, Bernhard!

Paule12/07/2013

Lach...und der ist gut gepolstert...der hält das aus. Außerdem - kann so ein "Arsch-Tritt" ja auch ein Super-Schub nach vorne sein. Super - gefällt mir...diese Wort-Spielerei. Lg Anita

Solino1012/07/2013

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